It came up from underneath, Fractured moonlight on the sea. Reflections still look the same to me, As before I went under. And it's peaceful in the deep, Cathedral where you can not breathe, No need to pray, no need to speak, Now I'm under And it's breaking over me. A thousand miles onto the sea bed, I found the place to rest my head.
Never let me go, never let me go, Never let me go, never let me go.
And the arms of the ocean are carrying me, And honest devotion was rushing out of me, And the crushes of heaven for a sinner like me, But the arms of the ocean delivered me.
Never Let Me Go (Florence And The Machine)
Продуктивный день у меня сегодня! Быстроарт, а вышел эпик. Хм.
UPD: Перерисовала. Я посчитала, что для эпика в первой версии арта было слишком много критичных ошибок. Изменениям подверглись: волосы, тело, лицо и оформление.
I usually do not write critiques but I felt that this one was worth it. I really like how you paired the song with the picture. It gives the image more depth and background especially if you listen to the melody when you gaze onto the creation. Keep up with the lyrical works!
I see a few technique flaws but those can easily be changed and fixed. The image's perception is pretty decent, maybe adding streams of light from above would give you more of an under the sea feel. The light in the corner is a little over powering with the light from above. From what I see it looks like you rushed the bubbles a little bit. Maybe take a little more time on them and have a bit more impact but your placement of them is great. You dont know how many people forget to put the bubbles coming from a person's lips. I like that touch.
All in all it is a beautiful piece that it seems like you put a lot of effort into .I am excited to see your future works. Good job!
I see a few technique flaws but those can easily be changed and fixed. The image's perception is pretty decent, maybe adding streams of light from above would give you more of an under the sea feel. The light in the corner is a little over powering with the light from above. From what I see it looks like you rushed the bubbles a little bit. Maybe take a little more time on them and have a bit more impact but your placement of them is great. You dont know how many people forget to put the bubbles coming from a person's lips. I like that touch.
All in all it is a beautiful piece that it seems like you put a lot of effort into .I am excited to see your future works. Good job!
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